Kia ora Abraham rāua ko Gabriel, this is Ben from the Summer Learning Journey.
Great work with this slide show! I had never heard of Enid Blyton but your post has taught me lots about her. I wanted to acknowledge in particular your formatting. It is very clear and easy to read. And the way you have had pictures fade into the slides worked well for grabbing my attention, awesome!
I’d love to know though, have either one of you read any of Enid Blyton’s books? If so, which ones? Do you have a favourite, or something specific that you enjoy about their books?
One last thing, to help you with your writing. Remember, to be consistent. I can tell that you have good grammar and punctuation but you have forgotten to use it in some places. For example, forgetting full stops and capital letters. It’s always helpful to take your time and check over your work one last time before showing it to others.
Tēnā koe Abraham,
ReplyDeleteWhat an informative slideshow on Enid Blyton! You have included lots of useful and interesting information and images. Ka pai!
I remember reading Enid’s books when I was your age. I loved the character George the best as she was always brave.
Who is your favourite character from Enid’s books?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Ngā mihi,
Charlotte
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Abraham rāua ko Gabriel, this is Ben from the Summer Learning Journey.
Great work with this slide show! I had never heard of Enid Blyton but your post has taught me lots about her. I wanted to acknowledge in particular your formatting. It is very clear and easy to read. And the way you have had pictures fade into the slides worked well for grabbing my attention, awesome!
I’d love to know though, have either one of you read any of Enid Blyton’s books? If so, which ones? Do you have a favourite, or something specific that you enjoy about their books?
One last thing, to help you with your writing. Remember, to be consistent. I can tell that you have good grammar and punctuation but you have forgotten to use it in some places. For example, forgetting full stops and capital letters. It’s always helpful to take your time and check over your work one last time before showing it to others.
That said, keep up the awesome work, tēnā kōrua!
Mā te wā.
thank you from Gabriel and Abraham
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